exhuxperation: (red shift)
general armitage "wafer crisp" hux ([personal profile] exhuxperation) wrote in [community profile] station72 2016-04-21 10:38 pm (UTC)

[ Here are their differences, outlined and clear as day.

Hux is controlled, even though he's furious. He pulls Ren forward with calculations running through his head, thinking of the next step, of counter attacks, of possibilities. Ren is chaos, unsurprising. His fury spills over into his motions, thrashing like a wild beast caught in a trap. The grip he has on the other man's wrist is barely enough as the forearm twists, slick mud and rain making it hard to keep steady. When his hand is shaken off, he digs his fingers into the cloth (and skin underneath) of Ren's elbow, intent on wrenching it behind him.

It's a temporary success, arm pinned. Hux presses his knee into the small of his back, though he doesn't last long that way. He leans in too far, catches a sharp elbow to the side of his jaw, knocking him to the side. The wet ground is unforgiving in that his balance gets completely thrown and just as quickly as he'd escaped this position earlier, he's flat on his back once more. ]

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